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An African wildlife ranger hires a mercenary with an ulterior motive to save his sanctuary from poachers.
NB: This is a revised logline (29Jan21)
SYNOPSIS:
‘The Poacher’ is an action feature film following the journey of a Wildlife Ranger in a South African Wildlife Conservation Park desperate to turn the tide of poaching activity. With the Ranger station and his job under threat, Samson hires a hit man known as ‘The Poacher’ to rid his park of poachers but his hired gun has an ulterior motive.
The film will be a medium to high budget production with a small cast centred on the dual lead characters of Samson and ‘The Poacher’. The unlikely combination sees the Ranger and the hired gun working together to rid the park of the poaching syndicates in an unconventional style.
Set in South Africa, the film has a realistic dirty feel to it of similar vein to ‘Blood Diamond’. Green screen scenes and special effects would suffice for some sequences while much of the shooting could be done within one area.
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Just a thought. A little incomplete. Try-- When rhino poachers in Africa gain the upper hand, ..... to win the war on wildlife. Now I know where, what's being endangered (poaching certain animals is tougher than poaching others, right?) and that the war is on wildlife not aliens who look like rhinos.