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NOT SO ORDINARY

NOT SO ORDINARY
By Surina Nel

GENRE: Action, Drama
LOGLINE:

A pit bull is ripped from her sheltered life and must fight for survival and an escape, to make it back to her young owner, who is fighting battles of her own.

SYNOPSIS:

Valerie's world crumble under her feet, when she learns the truth behind her scar. Not only does she need to come to terms with her hidden past, she also has to deal with Amy, the school bully. Valerie learns to stand up and defend herself, while her stolen pit bull fights for survival in a fighting syndicate.  Valerie decides to face the man who has fathered her and murdered her mother. Meanwhile, Ice, severely injured, makes her escape from the fighting syndicate and back to Valerie.

NOT SO ORDINARY

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Tasha Lewis

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Amazing Kacee

Maybe make the logline a little better with an incident and the solution as it does not tell us anything really and it sounds like a powder puff movie. maybe more emotional words, As it is just bland. Is this animation or live-action?

Surina Nel

Amazing Kacee thank you for the input, I will work on it. It is live action

Nathaniel Baker

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Matthew H Emma

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Matthew H Emma

Interesting concept.

Surina Nel

@Matthew H Emma thank you

J.B. Storey

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