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BLESS HER HEART
By Story Tiles Media
A weight management specialist, from Philadelphia, puts building her life with a serious boyfriend and lifelong friends on hold to take a job in a small southern town dying of obesity related illnesses.
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I think this has potential. It's a good concept if the script is written well. I'd keep it moving at a fast pace. Keep it full of funny moments. If it moves slow, it could come across as corny.
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BA Mason. Thanks for your suggestion. I'm starting to want to cut things down to your suggestion but I want to take out the student debt info.
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