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ROAD TO BERNAL
By Guillermo LM
When her reckless best friend drags her to Mexico on a mission to deliver a love letter, a cautious 69-year-old widow discovers adventure, romance, and a new lease on life in the shadow of the mystical Peña de Bernal.
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Road to Bernal is a love letter to México. After a near-fatal heart attack, two retirement home friends seize their second chance by embarking on a wild journey to deliver a love letter to central Mexico's mystical Bernal Stone. But their hilarious adventure turns unexpectedly when romance, magical encounters, and buried secrets threaten to change their lives forever.
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ROAD TO BERNAL sounds fun and unique, Guillermo LM. I suggest changing "mission" to "wild journey," and I think "in the shadow of the mystical Peña de Bernal" is vague. Other than those two things, solid logline.
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