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A young rapper, desperate to make it to the top, strikes a mysterious deal with a powerful figure offering him unparalleled fame and fortune in exchange for an unknown cost.
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Greddy is a young but helpless rapper who desperately strives to break into the music world’s elite. His career is stagnant: he lives in poverty, faces mockery, and gradually loses faith in himself. In moments of despair, he meets the mysterious Mr. D, who offers him a deal: dizzying success in exchange for something that Greddy doesn’t fully understand at first.
After signing the contract, Greddy begins to skyrocket. His tracks become hits, crowds of fans scream his name, and money flows in abundance. But with every new achievement, he starts to notice that he is losing loved ones, his health deteriorates, and he becomes more and more controlled by Mr. D. Greddy finds himself trapped by his own fame, realizing that he no longer controls his life.
At the height of his success, Greddy discovers the terrifying truth: his soul has become part of the deal, and when the contract expires, he will lose everything—not just his fame, but his very existence. Furthermore, his young wife Veronica falls seriously ill with a fatal disease. In a desperate attempt to find a way out, he confronts Mr. D, who reveals that the only way to save his wife is to give her his remaining time of life.
"Since the demonic contract is ending, your will and personality will fade, and you’ll suffer from emotional pain. The choice is yours, legendary rapper," Mr. D says dryly.
In the climax, Greddy makes an unexpected decision: he sacrifices his last life force to save his wife. The impact is immediate—Greddy dries up in seconds, screaming in agony. He turns into dry dust, which Mr. D blows off the tiled floor with a powerful exhale. Veronica, during surgery, loses her cancerous tumors in front of the doctors.
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