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LIES, HAMBURGERS, AND CUFFLINKS
By Gustavo Freitas
To save his life, a guy held hostage by the Russian mafia must find out who ordered the robbery of a 4 million dollar pair of cufflinks.
LIES, HAMBURGERS, AND CUFFLINKS
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I would omit HAMBURGERS and omit the 4.
To save his life, a guy held hostage by the Russian mafia must find out who ordered the robbery of a pair of million-dollar cufflinks.
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What kind of "guy" is your protagonist? There's no adjective to describe the person held hostage... and why ""4 million dollar"?