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INCONSIDERATE ACTS
By Deriq Carr

GENRE: Science Fiction
LOGLINE: The Anointed has been assigned to our Planet by the Overseer to prevent, in those whom fail to consider the outcome of their actions, a terrible deed indeed.

SYNOPSIS:

“Most never consider the outcome of their actions.” RICHARD FRANKLIN We have the power to show you the outcome of your actions so that you may reconsider. We will take your mind to a realm outside this reality’s reach. No one shall be harmed. PILOT: Journey into the minds of many who never think before they act. Follow us as we share these inconsiderate experiences. Jake used to be a very successful drug dealer until he was arrested in a third world country and sent home penniless. In his sorry and shame Jake decides his family will not care about him if he has nothing so he chooses suicide. A small woman; The Anointed, approaches Jake and gets him to admit his desire to die. She tells Jake he is wrong about his family not caring about him. “They miss you right at this moment,” she reveals. Jake thinks she is crazy until the Woman grabs his hand and they fly into a vortex where they wind up in his parent’s home. The phone rings and Jake’s Mother is told her son was found dead in a back alley. She collapses to the floor and screams. Jake tried to go to her but she does not hear or see him. The rest of Jake’s family hears the news and Jake is shocked to hear their words of love.

Phil Clarke

Not a logline. More of a tagline. You need to be conveying certain aspects of the story. A clear protagonist, a story aim, some sense of conflict, stakes etc. Do get in touch if you'd like some help, Deriq.

Deriq Carr

Thank you. I will continue to improve it, with your help.

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