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JAMAICAN SANDS: SCUBA PATROL
By Gabe Martinez

GENRE: Comedy
LOGLINE:

A team of dangerously under-qualified SCUBA instructors fight crime and participate in over the top adventures instead of doing their actual jobs, in Jamaica.  

JAMAICAN SANDS: SCUBA PATROL

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Amazing Kacee

this is not a logline - good first try, maybe research what it is and try again - a logline is like a hook! 25 words or less best of luck https://screencraft.org/2020/02/26/the-simple-guide-to-writing-a-logline

Amazing Kacee

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Gabe Martinez

Hello Kacee. I respectfully disagree. Have a nice day.

Nathaniel Baker

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