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FUTURE PROOF

FUTURE PROOF
By Darren Brown

GENRE: Science Fiction
LOGLINE:

A young man mysteriously gains the ability to see thirty seconds into the future. Unsure of how he received this power, he sets out to find answers. What he discovers is beyond anything he could imagine.

SYNOPSIS:

Collin is an average guy with a dead-end job. After being abducted by unknown agents who surgically implant a device in him, he then gains the ability to see the future, thirty seconds into the future, to be exact. While coming to terms with his new power in his day to day life, he notices that he is being followed and is visited by the same people that abducted him. Collin uses his power to help others and find answers to why he was chosen and who is behind it all. Further into the series, his quasi-super power gift is explained as combination of quantum physics, big data, and something terrifying. He eventually learns that it is someone significant to him that afforded him his mysterious power.

Phil Clarke

Not bad. Great initial concept (the new-found ability) but you could inject a little more about the rest of the story. It's more of an idea than a tale, currently. But a solid start.

Barry A.A. Dillinger

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