Okay.. I know the Main Characters. Inciting incident is the discovery. The Action - how to avoid the crooks. - Stakes - Successful delivery to the FP and Archbishop. Very good. Note: I prefer to comment rather than rate.

Eric Sollars This has an interesting premise, especially with the historical element tied to Charlemagne’s crown and the Notre Dame setting—it gives it a strong sense of place.

The logline is clear in terms of characters and goal, but it might benefit from sharper stakes or a unique twist to really elevate the tension.

Overall, it feels like a solid adventure-thriller setup with good potential.