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THE DEMON HUNTERS: JACK THE RIPPER
By Simon Hartwell
Evil has a name. But is it human
In a desperate bid to uncover the truth behind the infamous Jack the Ripper, Father Shaun and Sister Adriana travel back to 1888 Whitechapel, where they must confront a terrifying evil that may be more than just a man—a demon lurking in the shadows, ready to claim more victims.
SYNOPSIS:
In January 1888, Father Shaun and Sister Adriana race to save a postman from a frozen canal, only to be pulled through a time gate to the dark streets of Whitechapel. As they investigate the infamous Jack the Ripper murders, they uncover a chilling web of evil.
From the brutal fate of Emma Smith to the sinister rituals surrounding Anne Chapman, they confront a killer who may not be entirely human. With each jump through time, they face demonic forces and the haunting reality of a murderer lurking in the shadows.
As they unravel the mystery, Shaun and Adriana must stop the Ripper before he claims more lives. But when they discover the true identity of the killer, they realize that some evils are not easily vanquished, and the battle for justice may be far from over.
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Simple and easy to follow and will undoubtedly have a following, but what I am not gleaning from this logline is what's at stake. So they find out he was possessed? Okay, fine. So what? Where's the drama? I think if you can shine a light on why it matters, what your heroes (and perhaps the world) stand to lose, then this logline will be far stronger.
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