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When the leading lady of a film is found dead in her dressing room, detectives DI Clifford Wainwright and DS Caroline Evens must unravel a web of jealousy, betrayal, and dark secrets among the cast and crew to uncover the truth behind her shocking murder.
SYNOPSIS:
In the high-stakes world of film, where ambition and jealousy collide, the glamorous leading lady Sally Fielding is found dead in her dressing room, a knife plunged into her chest. As the production grinds to a halt, detectives DI Clifford Wainwright and DS Caroline Evens are called to unravel the shocking murder that has sent shockwaves through the cast and crew.
With a cast of characters harboring secrets, the investigation reveals a tangled web of affairs, betrayals, and hidden motives. From Sally’s tumultuous relationship with her co-star Shamim to the simmering tensions with her assistant Angela, everyone becomes a suspect. As the detectives dig deeper, they uncover a chilling connection between Sally’s death and her recent inheritance following her father’s passing.
As the clues unfold, the detectives discover that Sally was not only battling personal demons but also a deadly allergy that could have played a crucial role in her demise. With time running out and the pressure mounting, Wainwright and Evens must piece together the evidence before another life is lost.
Sorry, Simon, but this is not a logline. This is closer to a tagline. It's important to know the difference when it comes to marketing/pitching your work. Happy to explain a little more about the fundamentals of a logline. Feel free to message me anytime.
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Many thanks, Phil. You are correct. I placed the tagline in there as a place holder as I had yet to work on the Logline. I will message though, to get your thoughts on the logline I come up with.
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