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WAKING BEAUTY

WAKING BEAUTY
By Alainna MacPherson

GENRE: Sci-fi, Drama
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Frozen for 100 years, a woman awakes in a rebuilt post-apocalyptic world with no memory of ever being sick or how she came to be in a cryogenic chamber. 

WAKING BEAUTY

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Alainna MacPherson

Amazing Kacee Thoughts?

Amazing Kacee

Start with the incident which I do not know what that would be based on your logline - Incident then solution - ask your hero some tough questions I do not think we need the word MBA just graduate student or what makes your hero different than others why is this story different and why does it need to be made now - lots of producers do not want any virus stories or maybe change the catastrophic event from virus to something else!

Amazing Kacee

If she has no memory then how does she know it has been 100 years and how does she know where she is now is not her norm since she has no memory?

Alainna MacPherson

As the story isn't about the virus, I removed that bit.

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Alainna MacPherson

Thank you, Nathaniel Baker

Nate Rymer

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Alainna MacPherson

Thank you Nate Rymer

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