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REMNANTS OF REDEMPTION
By Maurice McGary

GENRE: Mystery, Thriller / Suspense
LOGLINE:

Authorities connect a string of murders to a seemingly innocent man while a mysterious woman discreetly seeks revenge for abused victims at the Earthwell Institue.       

SYNOPSIS:

DAVID – born into the world by addictive parents who lost him to the system; bare a mercurial thought pattern. David’s grandmother Reva ran a mental health facility dedicated to abused children; Earthwell Institute. Reva discovered David had multiple personalities due to David’s parent’s abuse and addiction. Reva secretly treated David for his multiple personalities with experimental psychiatric medication. Because of Reva’s dedication, David grows up and joins the military and is accepted in their medical program. All hell breaks loose when David gets into a fight so vicious, he ends up discharged with full benefits. David decides to continue his education as a medical student. He has a slight mental set back when he learns Reva dies the day he graduates medical school. David now takes on the task of running the Earthwell Institute by himself. Crippled by the thoughts of his childhood and his father, David decides to face his fears. He has the support of his friend Mike who goes with him to meet his father, Pete. Things take an unexpected turn that landed David in the hospital. Now things are destined to change because it’s more than David who woke up in that hospital bed. With Reva no longer around there’s nobody to stop David’s wrath. David takes over at Earthwell Institute with his own way of dealing and helping victims of abuse. Detectives Sheppard and Ryan discover that some of the victims of abuse at Earthwell have one thing in common… dead parents. Because the abused boys at Earthwell show no signs of being the parent’s killers, detectives are puzzled. All leads, but one, are all ruled out. With Earthwell, being their final place of investigation one woman remains a mystery; “Nora.” She seems to have an eerie connection to Earthwell. Mike who is the only active link to Nora, gets killed and all of whatever evidence Sheppard had vanishes into thin air. Cleverly, Sheppard believe she has uncovers documents that would eventually lead to the killer. Sheppard may have dug too deep and would not be prepared for this type of assassin. An unexpected showdown leaves viewers speechless as Sheppard hits and knocks Nora down. The boys once looking like mentally challenged now stand alert and ready to fight as trained killers. Sheppard and her partner is killed, Nora (newly disguised) is seen hiding the squad car in a remote area. She smiles as she looks down to thumb through a folder from the floor which reveals Davids birth records which indicate he was intersex and tranforms into Nora, a paper from the evidence board with arrows from David to Nora and then to the boys. A flash back shows Nora picking up and dropping off the boys at each of the crime scenes. The mystery goes on as the murderer isn't caught. I will work with producers for any rewrites (if asked of) as to the placement of our story and as to not exploit the transgender community in any way.

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