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After being diagnosed with Dissociative Identity Disorder, Lynanda attempts to integrate her aspects within a world full of predators and manipulative people with only the guidance and love of a death row inmate to keep her safe.
I like a lot of this, but try to condense it even further. "After a Dissociative Identity Disorder diagnosis, Lynanda struggles to integrate her aspects within a world full of predators with only a death row inmate's guidance." Less is (usually) more.
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Thank you so much. I appreciate any assistance and comments. I am not a writer or actor or producer. I am just a woman with a hell of a story to share.
You're quite welcome. I wish you great success with this story.
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Original and (partially))based on facts!