Sounds like fun

Thanks to all. Best wishes Rutger

I love your logline. It's uncanny that your characters resemble some of mine. Do we think alike? In Alien Base 420, there is a large aquarium containing some of my alien characters. Star Blazer, a seductive starfish with a unique talent, Aunt Fibian, the matriarch of the aquarium. and the angry frog. My problem is fixing my logline and adapting the novel into a screenplay.

Haha-that is so cool. For fixing your logline you could go to www.logline.it and post it there. Adapting the novel into a screenplay is tricky, I am not sure translating your screenplay one on one would do the trick. I could do it for you for free, but I'm not a good enough writer to make it work. What I did myself with three basic ideas is to let Jerel Damon write two of them, paid. The last one we wrote together. Jerel could do it, but I know there are at least two or three people as qualified as he is in your genre. His specialty is Comic Book style screenplays and crime, somewhat combined.

What I would do is make an account on www.scriptrevolution.com and check out some writers there.

Thanks, Judith, I just established the party that orders the greedy dolphin shrink to do his bidding': Great White ‘Padrino’.

Thanks Wilmer!

Thanks Grzegorz!

Thanks Tasha!

Thanks Nate!