THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
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BRIAN AND LUCY
By Art Arutyunyan
After losing his pregnant wife in an accident, a grieving farmer refuses to bond with their newborn daughter — until his wife’s ghost begins tormenting him.
[Comps: Take Shelter, Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind]
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This sounds like a gripping, unique story that's full of conflict, Art Arutyunyan. Your logline is just the setup right now. I suggest adding the story goal (what he does after his wife’s ghost begins tormenting him) and the stakes.