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BEYOND THE FINAL WHISTLE
By Hakim Kisakye

GENRE: Sports Drama, Musical
LOGLINE:

A talented young footballer must overcome university rivalries, family secrets, and dangerous vendettas to win the heart of a girl he loves and make it to the pros.

SYNOPSIS:

Set against the energetic backdrop of a vibrant university campus, Beyond the Final Whistle follows John, a passionate footballer whose daring rescue during a tragic bus fire changes everything. His act of heroism not only puts him in the spotlight but also triggers a fierce rivalry with wealthy, jealous competitors determined to claim victory at a major regional competition. Meanwhile, a talented but underestimated music band, "The Snow," struggles to overcome sabotage, internal conflicts, and the mysterious loss of their songs, fighting to showcase their true talent.

As romance blossoms between John and Sara—a bright law student with a love for music—their relationship becomes entangled in a web of ambition, jealousy, and violence. A relentless rival, Jacob, resorts to brutality to win her affection and dominate the competition, leading to a devastating confrontation involving a deadly bus fire and a critical injury. Amidst chaos and heartbreak, the characters confront their deepest fears, discovering that true victory lies not in fame or wealth, but in courage, integrity, and unity.

Beyond the Final Whistle is a gripping blend of sports drama, musical passion, and heartfelt storytelling—an inspiring journey of resilience that celebrates the power of the human spirit to overcome adversity and find hope beyond the chaos.

BEYOND THE FINAL WHISTLE

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Nate Rymer

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Hakim Kisakye

Thanks a lot Nate Rymer, you have just given me the energy to complete it's synopsis and it will soon be here .

Thanks a lot again.

Catherine Cole

Loglines do not use the character's name, instead they describe them, You've done just that.

Hakim Kisakye

Finally my synopsis is done.

Hakim Kisakye

Hi, Catherine Cole, thanks a lot, let me move on and correct it. Thanks again.

Tasha Lewis

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Nathaniel Baker

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Luís Mercês

It's supper cool! The end is chilling!

Hakim Kisakye

Thanks Luis, it's ok, if you have time, you may go through the entire script and i would love to here your feed back.

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