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When a Las Vegas plane tour operator finds an unusual relic, he and his taxi girlfriend battle the casino mafia, Feds,
and military for an alien cover-up.
SYNOPSIS:
‘ALIEN RETURN’ is a sci-fi action-packed thriller original feature film script.
1947: Six people -- a mobster, two financiers, two women and the pilot walk away from a burning plane in the Nevada desert into a military vehicle.
2017: Air Tour operator, Rick Adams flies his plane near the Nevada Airforce base ..."Can't fly any closer or they'll get their Jets and chase us.."
After a losing night at the casino, drunk Rick hails taxi driver Lorna Bates for a drive home but then must barter with her for a next-day plane ride.
Casino mob boss Gino ‘the Monster’ Alato’s footsteps resound down the long hallway to the basement vault to check on his profitable scam.
While renovating his childhood home, Rick finds his father’s lost ‘lucky’ medallion from 1947. This medallion kept his father fit and youthful looking until he lost it.
Rick takes Lorna for a date to the Casino to show off his father’s money magnet. The medallion brings unwanted attention from Casino personnel, Nevada Military, the Feds, and the CIA...and a couple of Unusuals.
Lorna gets an unexpected call from a local bank being renovated that finds a safety deposit box that was entrusted to her late mother from a New York financier who supposedly perished in a 1947 plane crash.
The box contains lost photos and documents from the Nevada incident. This leads Rick and Lorna to research and investigate the inception of the Copasotta Casino and Gino Alato.
Stealing the casino’s architectural drawings, Rick and Lorna discover the hidden vault where various corpses are preserved.
In their escape, they bump into men from the Military, Feds, and CIA -- all three carrying brief cases of money in exchange for the bodies.
The Mobsters chase Rick and Lorna to the top of the Hoover Dam. Rick stumbles and falls and the glowing medallion gets "sucked" into and imbedded into a winged statuette on the outside walkway of the Hoover Dam with a piercing scream. Overcome by uniforms, Rick and Lorna are thrown into a Military Vehicle and are taken away past Las Vegas and Rick's homestead. The Unusuals shake hands all around.
At dusk, the Hoover Dam is lighted on either side of river and the Dam ending at the four-towers and the two winged statues. A "FLYING CRAFT" comes out of the Hoover Dam lake reservoir flying slowly downwards to pick up the alien bodies and the Unusuals before a spectacular escape.
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After a Las Vegas tour operator finds an unusual object, he and his girlfriend battle the casino mafia, Feds and military, over the corpses of aliens that they want to keep secret.
The synopsis needs some more work to clarify who the "Unusuals" are supposed to be.