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SHALIMAR
By Maria Soriano

GENRE: Family, Adventure
LOGLINE:

A lonely orphan girl manifests a magical flying colt and becomes his mama, but soon realizes she needs to protect him from a supernatural force that wants to steal him.

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Maurice Vaughan

SHALIMAR is a unique Family Adventure, @Maria! I think your logline needs a little work structure wise. Something like: After a lonely orphan girl manifests a magical flying colt and becomes his mama, she protects/fights to protect him from a supernatural force that wants to steal him.

Abdusamad Shafiev

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