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LOVING MY ENEMY
By M Yano
A Father fosters a troubled teen who was an accomplice to his son's murder.
SYNOPSIS:
Instead of retaliation, a father, who loses his one and only son, decides to foster the troubled teen who was an accomplice to his son's murder, and invites him into his home, providing him love and compassion.
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Express this in a more "active" voice, and complete the statement. As it is, it simply conveys a sense of irony, with implied dramatic potential.
After a father fosters a troubled teen who was an accomplice to his son's murder...
e.g.: After a father fosters a troubled teen who was an accomplice to his son's murder, he tries love and compassion to change the teen's behaviour, and gain another son.
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I really like this one. Short, but intriguing. I agree with Charles' notes.
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