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ANGEL CHRONICLES: CANKER
By Vincent Kyere Kane

GENRE: Drama, Fantasy
LOGLINE:

A Seeming normal gathering of College students in a room turns to bloodshed with a supernatural twist to it all.

SYNOPSIS:

Four College students are gathered in a room. They are playing a game, a multiplayer mode of the famous game Call of Duty: Ghosts. They have divided themselves into two teams. One of the team loses due one other team’s seeming carelessness. George and Damien are on the losing team, with Elias and Kaffui (an African female name) on the winning team. George berates Damien for his constant stupidity which leads their team to lose on multiple occasions. George gets frustrated after they lose to the other team a fifth time. George stops playing the game in frustration and demands from Elias that they should play FIFA 2016, telling him that it would be a fair game of chance to see which one of them is better without Damien’s stupidity interfering with his flow. At this point we establish that Kaffui is a Tomboy as she cheers on Elias as they start playing FIFA.

Meanwhile in the corner of the room are two angels who debate over something as they observe the scene before them. The two angels are in the spirit realm and therefore cannot be seen by the students. Penuel is an Angel of the Third Order, and Zagzagel is an Angel of the First Order. Penuel tells Zagzagel that he has observed the timeline energies of the event before them and it will end in the death of Elias. Elias is vital to a plan they have to save the human race from being overcome by evil, therefore they cannot allow his death. Zagzagel tells Penuel that they cannot interfere directly with human events as that would lead to dire consequences for even they the angels. Zagzagel commands Penuel after some consideration to materialize into a human that Elias knows and get him out of the room. Penuel leaves through the wall of the room.

George gets defeated by Elias again in the FIFA game. This causes him to leave the room in frustration. As he leaves the room, Elias tries to convince him to stay, but George leaves him all the same at the doorstep. The angel Penuel comes into view dressed as normal human. The human he is portraying is called Matthew. Matthew is a religious boy on campus who has been bothering Elias to come to church or other church related activities multiple times. Matthew comes to Elias at the doorstep and tries to convince him to go with him to a Youth Forum which is taking place soon. Elias tries to give excuses, but Matthew doesn’t leave, until Abigail, Elias’ girlfriend comes from nowhere, embraces Elias and kisses him into the room slamming the door in Matthew’s face.

By now Kaffui and Damien are playing FIFA together.

Penuel comes back through the wall to Zagzagel and tells him that he failed. Penuel tells Zagzagel that he still senses Death’s miasma in the air and that they have to do something. Zagzagel tells Penuel that they cannot interfere any further but must call on the King of kings to help them find a way. Penuel concurs and leaves the room once again to call upon the King of kings.

Damien gets a flush of anger and envy as he observes from the corner of his eye Elias and Abigail get romantic. He tells Kaffui that it’s not fair that Elias gets to be the rich kid with the hottest girl on campus. He continues to say that Elias has a high GPA and is also evidently very good at games. He says it’s not fair and that something needs to be done about it. Kaffui doesn’t understand why Damien is behaving so strangely and decides to leave the room just as Abigail also leaves since she came only to collect something from Elias.

When the two ladies leave, Damien gets up and stabs Elias multiple times in the stomach; Damien regrets his act immediately after he sees Elias lying in a pool of blood. Damien cuts his own throat after being influenced by a serpentine demon that it is the only way out.

Zagzagel is horrified as he watches Elias bleed to death. A Reaper appears to collect the souls only to be stopped by Zagzagel from reaping Elias’ soul (who is not dead yet). The Reaper warns Zagzagel of the consequences of breaking the Cosmic laws and leaves with Damien’s reaped soul. Zagzagel proceeds to heal Elias. When Elias gets up, being fully restored, Zagzagel tells him they’ve met before and restores his childhood memories of him. Zagzagel tells him that they are in a lot of trouble (The children of the Nether God are coming) and that he believes that the only way to escape the consequences is visit the Dream god Morpheus. The room starts to shake like an earthquake. Zagzagel creates a bright doorway and they disappear through it.

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