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CARNIVAL

CARNIVAL
By Joseph Murkijanian

GENRE: Horror, Fantasy
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When a group of teenagers explore an abandoned carnival, they find themselves trapped in a nightmarish underworld that forces them to confront their deepest fears and personal demons, testing the bonds of their friendship and the strength of their families.

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In the suburban town of Crestwood, three teenage friends—Jason, Ethan, and Danny—find themselves drawn to the eerie allure of an abandoned carnival rumored to be cursed. Jason, the brooding son of a notorious crime boss, struggles with the weight of his father's legacy, while Ethan, the cautious son of a police detective, grapples with the pressure of living up to his father's expectations. Danny, the comic relief of the group, is always seeking adventure, but his bravado masks deeper fears. When Danny proposes an exploration of the old carnival, Jason's thrill-seeking nature and Ethan's reluctance create a tension that foreshadows the chaos to come. As the boys venture into the carnival, they are quickly engulfed in a nightmarish reality. The carnival, once a place of joy, has transformed into a twisted reflection of their fears and regrets. They stumble upon the House of Mirrors, where their distorted reflections reveal their inner demons. Each boy is confronted by a manifestation of their worst fears: Jason faces a demonic version of his father, Ethan is haunted by the specter of his father's disappointment, and Danny is tormented by the ghost of his sister, whom he couldn't save in a tragic fire. The carnival becomes a living entity, feeding off their fears and forcing them to confront the darkness within themselves. Meanwhile, Detective Reynolds, Ethan's father, is on high alert after his son goes missing. He teams up with Vincent, a loyal enforcer for Don Salvatore, Jason's father, to search for the boys. Their uneasy alliance highlights the tension between law enforcement and organized crime, as both men are driven by the need to protect their sons. As they delve deeper into the carnival, they encounter supernatural forces that challenge their beliefs and force them to confront their own pasts. The boys' journey through the carnival culminates in a terrifying ride on the 'Ride to Hell,' where they are plunged into a surreal underworld filled with lava, demons, and the echoes of lost souls. Here, they must work together to escape the clutches of the carnival's dark magic. As they navigate the treacherous landscape, they learn that the only way to escape is to confront their fears and make a choice about who they want to be. In a parallel narrative, Reynolds and Vincent face their own demons as they search for the boys. Their journey through the carnival leads them to confront the consequences of their choices, ultimately forcing them to reevaluate their roles as fathers and protectors. The climax of the story sees both groups converge in a final showdown against the carnival's malevolent forces, where they must fight not only for their lives but for their identities. As the boys emerge from the carnival, they are forever changed. They have faced their fears and emerged stronger, forging a deeper bond of friendship. Detective Reynolds and Vincent, too, find a new understanding of their roles as fathers, vowing to protect their sons from the darkness that once threatened to consume them. The story concludes with a sense of hope and renewal, as the boys leave the carnival behind, ready to embrace their futures with newfound strength and clarity.

CARNIVAL

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Maurice Vaughan

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Maurice Vaughan

I'm looking forward to watching this movie, Joseph Murkijanian! It reminds me of movies like A Nightmare on Elm Street and Evil Dead, but it's original enough to be its own thing. Two things that stand out about your movie are the unique location (abandoned carnival) and "testing the bonds of their friendship and the strength of their families."

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