Hello John, It is an interesting concept. I never thought about people having to write up a hagiography for someone. Can I give you some tips? You can feel free to ignore all of them of course. I would leave the "Screenplay by...Wordslinger" out of the title. Everyone can see you wrote it. It belongs on the front page or in the opening credits. Not in your movie title. Why does the title have first this name: Sanctuary of Authenticity and then The Angels Tuning Fork? It is a movie from a series? If it is not I would pick one of the two again because of the length. The length of the logline is too long and should not contain a link to a site.

The Life of Friar & Poet Thomas of Celano: 13 Centuries after the resurrection of Jesus Christ, Thomas writes a poem about Judgement Day as he writes hagiographies about the life of Francis of Assisi, born Giovanni di Pietro di Bernardone, informally named as Francisco, an Italian Catholic friar, deacon and preacher.

My suggested logline: We follow the life of Friar & Poet Thomas of Celano during 13'th century AD as he writes a hagiography about the life of Italian friar, deacon and preacher Francis of Assisi.

Greetings Marjolein

Greetings Marjolein Smit, I like the title the way it is, and no, just a single screenplay. I love your suggestion for a log line. Thank you much spending time, and offering wisdom Marjolein Smit... Sorry for the delay on this reply.