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A grumpy man in his 60's gets more than he bargained for when he comes to the rescue of a young woman.
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Grady Spencer hates everything about modern society and wonders when common sense and logic died. While shopping for groceries at a local store, he reluctantly interferes with an assault on a young woman named Ava only to find out that Ava's attacker is part of a deadly four man hit squad hired to retrieve a mysterious package given to Ava by her murdered boss.
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