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SHANE AND IVY: WE'RE ELOPING TO VEGAS
By Sandra R Gregory
FORMAT: Feature | Comedy / Rom-Com | Young Adult – Coming of Age – Family-Friendly
LOGLINE: An over-eager young man and his Peter Pan-obsessed fiancée elope to Vegas, and somehow, though the chaos of family meltdowns, pre-marriage counseling, and bizarre villains, they must discover who each other is so they can leave Neverland behind.
COMPS: MEET THE FOCKERS meets AMERICAN WEDDING
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I think the story sounds like it could be extremely entertaining! My $0.02 on the logline however: A> Is it a groom-to-be or a would-be groom? B> "What else could possibly go wrong?" - the real estate is so valuable in the logline that it could be used to deliver more about the story than asking a rhetorical question. C> Same with "and worse yet".... let the reader be the judge. Again, my $0.02. May your journey with this be a success!
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