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A Special Ops team searching for missing soldiers in Afghanistan stumbles upon a Biblical nightmare- Giants from the Book of Genesis, risen and ready for war. When modern weapons fail, an elite sniper must confront her past and embrace her divine calling to stop them.
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**Preacher’s Daughter: Giant Slayer
Elite sniper Amanda Franklin was raised to believe in the power of faith, but after a demonic encounter at her father's church in her youth, she buried her beliefs beneath years of military discipline. Now, leading a covert special forces unit deep into the Afghan mountains, Amanda is on a classified mission to locate a missing squad—only to uncover something far worse. The mountains hide an ancient evil long thought to be myth: the Nephilim, giant offspring of fallen angels, imprisoned beneath the earth for centuries.
When these resurrected behemoths slaughter her team, Amanda and a few remaining survivors find themselves in a desperate fight for survival. Bullets and modern warfare prove useless against the towering creatures whose power defies explanation. As she unravels the mystery behind their return, Amanda discovers that the Nephilim are the harbingers of something far more terrifying—an apocalyptic force seeking to reclaim the world.
Faced with overwhelming odds, Amanda is forced to confront the faith she abandoned. With the help of a mysterious scholar who has spent his life studying forbidden texts and relics, she learns that only one weapon can stand against the fallen: the name of the one they still fear. As ancient prophecies come to life and the Nephilim’s power grows, Amanda must embrace her true calling—not just as a soldier, but as a warrior of faith.
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Gregory Bonds, wow! This is a bold, cinematic concept that blends military action with supernatural and biblical mythology in a way that feels fresh and high-stakes. The hook is immediately gripping and the protagonist’s personal arc hints at depth beyond the action. To refine it slightly, consider softening the use of all-caps unless it’s for formatting clarity; it can read as shouting. Otherwise, this is a killer logline with strong commercial potential.
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Thank you so very much, Ashley, I appreciate the review and feedback; a result of "late night writing", lol! I will revise, thank you!! And thanks for getting the "protagonist’s personal arc hints at depth beyond the action", love that.
All the best!
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This is awesome
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