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Detective Dave Marsh is forced to look into his past and deal with an old lover and adversary and hopefully start a new brighter chapter in his life.
SYNOPSIS:
Smoke screen is a crime drama written in a Film Noir style.
The last accepted Vice, Tobacco, has finally been outlawed.
Detective Marsh is forced to look into the past and deal with an old lover and adversary.
Like most of us he has tried to ignore the ghosts of the past and move on with his life. Through his work and with the help of a loyal co-worker he has to take responsibility for his past so he can move on to a better future for him and, his family.
Through a simple sting operation he ties up the loose ends of his past in one fell swoop... but his adversary has other plans. Who has trapped who?
The first screenplay I wrote. I would appreciate any feedback.