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In a neighborhood where the confluence of ambition, deceit, and dark secrets leads to deadly consequences, everyone has something to hide.
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QUARTERFINALIST - DIVERSITY SPRINGBOARD SCREENWRITING CONTEST - 2021
SYNOPSIS:
The pilot episode introduces Harold Barclay, a man with dissociative identity disorder, recently released from a mental hospital, who arrives in Pittsburgh with a dark agenda. He reconnects with his former college lover, Daniel Bowers, a charismatic figure running for Pittsburgh City Council with his wife, Stephanie, by his side.
Harold's alter personalities, Ivan and Ivanna, are determined to destroy Daniel for a past trauma. Harold's arrival coincides with a public altercation involving Daniel and local spa owner Tish Adams, which Harold records. He then hosts a housewarming party, inviting the entire neighborhood, including Daniel and Stephanie.
Tensions escalate at the party, leading to a violent confrontation between Daniel and Harold. Meanwhile, Stephanie becomes intrigued by Harold, adding another layer of complexity to the situation. After the party, Harold is confronted by Tish, leading to a shocking and violent event that implicates Harold further in his dark intentions.
As the episode unfolds, Harold's manipulative and dangerous nature becomes more apparent, setting the stage for a thrilling and suspenseful series that explores themes of identity, revenge, and power dynamics.
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