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When murderous smugglers attempt to steal America's critical minerals, a quirky, immigrant family must set aside their haunting, difficult past to save the EV industry.
SYNOPSIS:
Our hero, TAYJA WILSON, 35, is a fiercely loyal, intense, dark-haired stunner who must transition from a shy wallflower into a confident, hard ass, give 'em shit commando, in order to save her family as well as the EV industry.
We learn compassionate, immigrant families can thrive & succeed in America yet fate can bring about dangerous and dynamic change. (similar to "We're the Millers")
Tayja struggles after a nasty divorce.
Suddenly her parents are murdered! (it's murder to look like suicide, so Cops do nothing...)
Our antagonist, SHERMAN BLANKOFF, 38, makes millions by illegally transporting rare earths from Canada into the US. With gold teeth, rippling muscles and 22K gold chains that glisten against a powerful, muscular body, he boasts: "I own this entire coastline Comrade. Big Tech are gonna bite each other's legs off for my smuggled minerals."
But when millions of dollars go missing, murders escalate and her daughter is kidnapped -- It's up to Tayja and her quirky, hilarious immigrant relatives to redeem and salvage the situation.
(winner of Honourable Mention at the Big Apple Film Festival, 2023.)
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