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A retired teacher and her friends are determined to drive out the local drug dealers and make the neighborhood safe again.
SYNOPSIS:
Maggie Kincaid, a retired teacher raising her orphaned grandson, knows she has to find a way to make the neighborhood safe again.
After being assaulted by a local drug dealer, Maggie is determined to drive out the crime from her neighborhood. When her neighborhood watch fails to take off, she relies on retired friends to track and document the dealers' activities. In the meantime, the dealers are getting bolder, and the police can't seem to do anything.
When she turns to a retired detective for help, things spiral out of control until the dealers kidnap her grandson.
Desperate to get her grandson back, she takes the fight to the dealers, backed only by her friends, two retired cops, and a retired ex-Marine.
In the final showdown, she manages to secure the safe release of her grandson (just barely), and the criminals are brought to justice
[NOTE: This is an ensemble dramedy for two senior female and four senior male protagonists. Add in a half-dozen antagonists and a few supporting roles.]
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