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MERCENAIR

MERCENAIR
By Maggie Grant

GENRE: Action, Drama
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The true story about a charming, risk taking pilot of fortune who lives his life at full throttle. He assembles an elite group of equally daring men and women ALL experts in their fields. Together, they pursue adventure and fortune, through thrilling heists, drug smuggling, flying air support for revolutionaries and even pulling off some heroic rescues. 

Nathaniel Baker

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Frank Baruch

Very awesome concept, Maggie! I wish there were more films centered around aviators and their dangerous exploits. Does this script take place in modern times or is it a period piece?

I can already picture the ensemble of characters and the dangerous situations they put themselves through, but I'm a little hazy on what the basic premise is in regard to the inciting incident, the setting and their major goal. What exactly are they stealing? What is the inciting incident that kicks off the "Pilot of Fortune" assembling a team in the first place? Apart from coming home alive what do they intend to achieve? Fame? Fortune? Infamy? Are these WWII pilots? Tuskegee airmen? Japanese kamikaze? Cold War pilots?

Anyways, this is a really good start!

Tasha Lewis

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