THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
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STAY AWAKE
By Alana de Freitas
When the nightmares of a teenage come to life in the form of brutally murdered local girls, she races against time to uncover who the killer is before her own innocence comes under suspicion.
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This is strong. I like this. I think you can trim a few extra words here and there and make it more active like instead of "start coming to life" it can just be "come to life" and "she must race against time" it can be "races against time".
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