THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
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FUSE
By Lee Whittaker
A detective's childhood memories about her mother's unsolved death
unfold, leading her to a pharmaceutical corporation and the major
political gains they will obtain from their corruption.
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This is a pretty strong and clear logline, Lee! I think if I had to force a note it'd be to find ways to clean it up/trim words out. Like maybe just "leading her to a corrupt pharmaceutical corporation gaining political power." at the end? Something like that. Anyway, good work!
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