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RETROGRADE
By Craytus Jones

GENRE: Drama, Fantasy
LOGLINE: A US Marine with PTSD is investigated by the US Government after exhibiting near superhuman genius and physicality, and must fight, with the help of friends and a sympathetic government psychologist, to keep his freedom and way of life.
Craytus Jones

Hmmm. I see what you mean. In this case, the soldier's the hero, PTSD is the flaw, the US Government is the opponent, his attempt to keep them from taking away his freedom is the battle, his lifelong friend is his ally and the life-changing events are threefold: the explosion, his method of coping, his fight to remain who he is, how he is and where hie is. There's also another opponent who turns out to be a friend. I'll work on rewriting the log line. Thanks for the pointers. Cheers!

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