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Set on a Caribbean Island, a daring diamond robbery takes place. The rarest uncut diamonds in the world are stolen but betrayal, deceit and greed set off a treasure hunt for 40 missing stones. For some, it will end in death but for others a new life of luxury wealth and love awaits. Sometimes the good guys do win.
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Three robbers from London go to a beautiful Caribbean island and steal millions of dollars worth of uncut diamonds, amongst the booty is "The Rhombus" a stone so big, no one has ever had the nerve to cut and polish it. They bury the stones but five years later, when they come back to dig them up forty have gone missing. With all hell breaking loose, and with people being killed, one of the guys falls in love with a gypsy bandit.
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Thanks for the 5* rating. I have just finished re writing the book that tries to mirror the script. But from 100+ pages to 250 pages of book. There was so much more to the story in the book. It looks like there's another re write of the script in my future.
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