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BANSHEE
By Ray Crites
When her daughter vanishes overnight, a drug-addicted single mother claws her way through the underbelly of a corrupt town to unravel a tangled web of abuse, trafficking, and betrayal -- leaving only a trail of blood and reckoning in her wake.
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Ray Crites This logline delivers a gritty, high-stakes thriller with a clear emotional core. The protagonist’s desperation, flaws, and drive make her instantly compelling, and the phrase “leaving only a trail of blood and reckoning in her wake” provides a sharp, memorable punch. The tone is dark and cinematic, and the setup promises both emotional depth and intense action. To perfect it, you might consider hinting at a unique obstacle or twist that sets this story apart from similar gritty revenge narratives, but overall, this is a strong and impactful logline.
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This sounds thrilling, Ray Crites! And fantastic job on the logline! You used words that make your logline pop, like "vanishes," "claws," "underbelly," and "reckoning."