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SYNOPSIS:
Gymnophobe: Someone who has a fear of nudity. A Non - Gymnophobe is a Naturist, A.K.A. Nudist. This Tale chronicles the Naturists dealing with a Landowner claiming an historic, public, and very secluded Naturist Beach as His property. He cannot see the beach below. His actual property is 99% above a tall silt cliff with just a sliver of land at the bottom. He eventually concedes the beach is public, and resorts to blocking the sliver of land that has a path used to access the beach. True ownership of this land is disputed, therefore the conflict continues. This leads to the Landowner causing landslides down the cliff attempting to wipe away the entire beach, disregarding that people below may be injured. The Naturists finally discover a clever way to defeat the Landowner, and can sunbathe in peace.
I just finished rewriting my Logline on here, and adding a Synopsis. Holy Moly, making every word say a lot is not easy ! I did not expect it to take some clever wordsmithing.