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DEADLY DUTCH HIGH SERIES — THE GATE OPENS (OPENING SCENE)

DEADLY DUTCH HIGH SERIES — THE GATE OPENS (OPENING SCENE)
By B.A Sins

GENRE: Thriller / Suspense, Horror
LOGLINE:

When three teens arrive at an isolated island high school, the gates respond, the rules watch back, and survival depends on whether they obey—or challenge—the living system that has already chosen them.

SYNOPSIS:

Deadly Dutch High™ follows three teens entering an isolated island academy where authority behaves like a living system and rules are enforced without explanation. As the students navigate their first year, the school itself begins to respond to their choices—observing, remembering, and quietly punishing curiosity. What begins as uneasy normalcy escalates into psychological and supernatural horror, forcing them to decide whether survival comes from obedience or from confronting the institution that has already claimed them.

DEADLY DUTCH HIGH SERIES — THE GATE OPENS (OPENING SCENE)

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Marcos Fizzotti

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B.A Sins

Thanks to everyone who read and rated the opening — I really appreciate the time and support.

Both the first opening scene and the second scene have now been updated, with changes focused on layout, formatting, and presentation for a cleaner TV/film draft. The story and scene content remain unchanged, just updated and expanded in a few places.

If you’re open to it, I’d also love to hear what elements most influenced your rating — whether it was atmosphere, pacing, character introduction, or something else. That kind of insight is incredibly helpful as I continue refining the presentation.

Thanks again for the engagement. More updates coming.

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