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SYNOPSIS:
Guardian Animal teenagers celebrate Canada's Centennial as best they can in 1964.American Civil Rights and South African Apartheit are affected as a result as a Thunderbird driven by a purpose helps the kids grow into their calling
You have only the beginning of the story and should write it as a children's book first. Get it published. You are not writing standard screenplay format so its an outline and incomplete story. It is not a screenplay. Where is the beginning inciting incident? Act 2, 3? Phone if u have free long distance calls. Aloha Doris in Hawaii 808.636.1300