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After being rescued by a deranged admirer, a famous singer has to ally with him to survive from the zombie-like people who broke into their house.
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A silent alien invasion turns people into brainwashed-smiling-people who use kindness to abduct people and turn them.
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I like it but needs no more detail. Who are the chilling beings? Demonic spirits?
Aray Brown thanks! I now tweaked it a little since it was old. Since the "twist" comes in the middle I didn't know how to structure properly to maximize the impact in the logline. I admit I still suck writing them.