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FINAL RUN (FEATURE VERSION)
By Ken Foley

GENRE: Sci-fi, Action
LOGLINE:

"Moon" meets "John Wick."


In the future, a weary interstellar mercenary plans to leave the hard life behind. But when he agrees to one last job for a former employer, he discovers his cargo hides a deadly secret. Now relentlessly pursued by both sides of the law, he finds himself embroiled in a deadly gambit that will ultimately decide not just his fate, but humanity's as well. 

SYNOPSIS:

A full length feature based on my short, FINAL RUN.

Synopsis coming soon.

William Gunn

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William Gunn

I'd have to read the screenplay before I could give it a higher rating. Sounds interesting!

Wilmer Villanueva

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William Gunn

You may want to trim down the Log Line a little bit. Maybe even by 1/2 if possible. I know that can be hard...trust me, I really do. But in the long run it's worth it. Rewrite it using a lot less wordage. Look at Netflix for Great Examples of Log Lines!!! They have just about the best! I still want to read the screenplay wgunn1953@hotmail.com

Nathaniel Baker

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Roberto Vitale

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Roberto Vitale

This logline is very good, in fact one of the better ones I've read here. It is a little long, but that's okay, it's not a 'marketing logline' which is different. It does have the main parts: Protagonist, Goal, Antagonist/s. The Death Stakes need to be more clearly defined.

Tasha Lewis

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Val Chernyavskiy

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Val Chernyavskiy

It seems to me that you need to uncover in the logline what kind of cargo in order to understand the danger for the main character and for the inhabitants of the earth.

Nate Rymer

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