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SYNOPSIS:
Michael, Andres and Demetrius have been friends from elementary school through college. Growing up in the same neighborhood and being best friends is not the only thing that these three men have in common their thrill of killing is what keeps their bond tight they are each other’s secret keepers.
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Spooky! The synopsis giveaway that they're all killers is a great hook. Maybe try to work that into your logline?