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FADE TO FIFTY

FADE TO FIFTY
By Kathryn Carmichael

GENRE: Comedy
LOGLINE:

"Invisible to society, visible to herself: one woman's hilarious journey to self-rediscovery. Overlooked and underestimated, battling society's 'youth or bust' mentality, she discovers that midlife isn't a crisis—it's an opportunity for the adventure of a lifetime”.

SYNOPSIS:

After a hilarious day at a Spa with her daughter, where her HRT patch has a life of its own. A woman of a “certain age” frustrated with feeling invisible, decides she’s not going down without a fight. Armed with a laptop, hot flashes, and a wicked sense of humour, she launches a blog that's one part menopause survival guide, and two parts middle-finger to societal expectations. Her blog goes viral, and she finds herself catapulted from invisible to invincible.

Phil Clarke

I can see what you're aiming for here, Kathryn, but I would advise including more distinct concept detail in your logline: your lead's want; who/what opposes it; what's at stake etc. Happy to chat more about this if you wished. Feel free to private message me anytime.

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Kathryn Carmichael

Hi Phil Clarke thanks for the feedback it's always super helpful...I will have a fiddle with it and see if I can make it more rounded and not just whats at stake. Thanks Kathryn

Kathryn Carmichael

"Invisible to society, visible to herself: one woman's hilarious journey to self-rediscovery. Overlooked and underestimated, battling society's 'youth or bust' mentality, she discovers that midlife isn't a crisis—it's an opportunity for the adventure of a lifetime”.

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