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THE LAST DAY
By Ritchie Johnston
In the aftermath of a robbery gone wrong, the surviving robbers plan the heist of a vault in the middle of nowhere, but are they ready for the real secrets inside.
SYNOPSIS:
When a Heist goes off plan a misfit team, consisting of a psycho, a hacker and a thief make a last ditch effort to take the payday of their lives over the course of one evening. However in order to survive the night they find themselves contending with deception, manipulations, lies and and a dirty secret that could make it their Last Day
Written in 2013, Released in 2018, by P.O.M.M Films.
THE LAST DAY
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Your logline is solid up until "but are they ready for the real secrets inside," Ritchie Johnston. I think that part is vague.
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Thank you for checking this one out it's one of my earliest pieces which ended up being made as a no budget indie piece. It's actually available on youtube
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You're welcome, Ritchie Johnston. Ok, cool. Scratch my feedback then. I thought you were pitching this project.
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