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GUNNISON
By Daniel Duane

GENRE: Science Fiction, Thriller / Suspense
LOGLINE:

Two brazen gunmen capture an alien pilot and evade a relentless colonel being hunted by a disgraced sharpshooter with a personal score.

SYNOPSIS:

A group of friends search the wreckage of an alien craft for survivors before being ambushed by gunmen. A man hunt for the missing pilot ensues along with protests from grieving, suspicious parents bent on their own justice. Stephanie Myers, a disgraced Marine and sharpshooter, becomes the unwitting pawn of a cover up. She’s pushed over the edge when her past is exposed by witnesses, sending her on a murderous rampage to eliminate key players.

Michael Dzurak

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Leonardo Ramirez

Hi Daniel - there is some specific information that the logline is missing such as the protagonist's goal and the stakes. You don't have to strictly adhere to the following template but it does serve as a well-crafted guide to the elements that are missing:

“After ______ (the inciting incident/the event that sets the plot in motion), a _______ (an adjective and the protagonist's position/role) tries to _______ (goal of story) so/in order to ________ (stakes).”

Robyn Henderson

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