Maybe leave some suspense in the logline, like "Spoiled by her late mum’s baking, an anxious bride’s quest for the perfect wedding cake threatens to leave her without a groom." So the threat leaves the reader guessing as to whether or not the groom would leave her.
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I love the irony!
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Maybe leave some suspense in the logline, like "Spoiled by her late mum’s baking, an anxious bride’s quest for the perfect wedding cake threatens to leave her without a groom." So the threat leaves the reader guessing as to whether or not the groom would leave her.
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