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“A deranged lawyer in an affluent gated community squares off with a street mobster when he conspires with his neighbors to plan the murder of a serial burglar.”
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What are the stakes associated with the plan? What's the obstacle? That would make this more complete.
Thanks RB. I'm on it.
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What are the stakes associated with the plan? What's the obstacle? That would make this more complete.
1 person likes this
Thanks RB. I'm on it.
1 person likes this
Happy to help!
Rated this logline