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"THE PARTY"
By Matthew H Emma

GENRE: Drama
LOGLINE:

A passive Jewish man must thwart his overbearing grandmother's attempts to prevent the engagement to his long-standing Greek girlfriend and subsequent conversion to Orthodox Christianity.

"THE PARTY"

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Kay Luke

It should be "his engagement" not "the engagement". And you should specify Greek Orthodox Christianity so we know it's not Latvian Orthodox or whatever.

I'm curious as to why you and others people put "logline added by" as if it were a credit? This is something I've never encountered outside Stage 32.

Or did you only write the logline and not the script?

Matthew H Emma

Why would someone getting engaged to a Greek Orthodox person convert to Latvian or another branch? Secondly, I did write the script.

Miodrag Sreten Milanovic

There are no specify for Greek Ortodox Christianity, it's all the same in Russian, Bulgarian, Serbian, Syrian etc. Christianity. Logline sounds interesting...

Matthew H Emma

Thanks Miodrag.

Rutger Oosterhoff

Rated this logline

Matthew H Emma

Thanks Rutger.

T.L. Davis

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Matthew H Emma

Thanks T.L.

Annerley Saayers

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Matthew H Emma

Thanks Annerley.

Nathaniel Baker

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Jim Catizone

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Matthew H Emma

Thanks Nathaniel and Jim.

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