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VONELLE
By Lauran Childs

GENRE: Drama
LOGLINE: Vonelle is a beautiful black transsexual in her 40s who, after a fight with her boyfriend, seeks to destroy a young couple in love.
Juno Dante Night

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Christopher Poet

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Christopher Poet

I am back with another review xP

Clear MC

Clear Conflict

But I am not sure what the stakes are. What is Vonelle going to lose if she does not enact her revenge?

I am suspecting her boyfriend is cheating on her and she has found out. She lashes out to ruin his relationship with this other woman in an effort to save her own relationship. This would be a clear stake to her.

4 starts!

Nathaniel Baker

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